Saturday, April 18, 2009

Truth

A third and final poem inspired by the Odyssey. Are you bored by this trend, yet? This one is based on line 181 of book 24, the last book of the epic poem, and follows the same loose-sonnet form I used in 'Spring Morning.'


Truth

You fired bolts of groaning from your bow
and found your mark within a weaker frame,
entrenched, expectant of a violent blow,
yet unprepared the moment that it came
and caught the breast to cut it deep, just so,
and still the sighing breath that drew your aim.

So now, as soil saps the running tide
of crimson, pulse and pound, up from the cleft,
a fatal hope fast finds itself denied
and wonders what desire might be left,
when, with a touch, the waking heart has died
and left behind a shell, of life, bereft.

But yours is not the burden, nor the blame,
for truth cannot be reckoned as a theft.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is wonderful!
The imagery at the end is the best.

Are you back from NY/Canada?
How was it?

Cartesian Quies said...

Haha, I knew you'd like this poem, Cold Soul. You always did prefer the depressing ones. Yes, indeed, I am back from Canada. As of 3 hours ago, in fact.